Well, the remastered version isn't really from my improved writing skills. Although many of the edits are what I would've made, the editing isn't my own. Therefor I can't really claim the edits as my own writing style. Although, deviantMIND1 did do a good job in emulating my own style. It will probably be a while before I make my final decision, because I'm gonna wait until deviantMIND1 has made his edits to all of the chapters. That way, I can do it all at once.